bài mẫu task 1 table thi 16/4

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Từ đồng nghĩa

Output: yield (n,v) 

Cost: expense 

Scale -> level 

Pay -> income/salary/wage 

Number ->figure/quantity 

Từ nối so sánh

While 

Whereas 

Compared to /in comparison with 

Followed by 

Bài mẫu (182 words)

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The table shows how much industrial ships and small boats spend and gain in marine shipping industry.  Overall, Although, the number of small boats is more than 20 times that of industrial ships, output of big-level industry is higher than that of small-level industry. While the number of small boats  is 12.000.000, that of industrial ships is only 500.000. Output of annual catch of each sector is slightly different for consumption food with 29 million tones produced in the industry scale, compared to 24 million tones yielded in the smaller scale. The Amount of Food gained  for Industry us is 22 million tones in big scale  and zero in small scale. Salaries of employees in big scale, being from $25000 to  $250000 which are one hundred times higher than those in small scale. In contrast, The figure for people who work in small boats is 50 times higher, at 40 million compared to 8 million of big scale. Finally, Although, big Scale uses much fewer ships than small scales, it consumes 4 times as much energy as small scales. 

process solar water heating system

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Đề bài:  The diagram shows a method for warming  water by using  indirect solar water heating system

Bài làm (155 words)

 The diagram highlights  a process for heating water by using a Solar system 

Overall, the Solar water heating system consists of 3 main parts: Solar collector panel, heat transfer unit and storage tank. 

First, the Heat transfer unit is provided with cold water. Here, it is pumped into the solar collector panel through a pine line. An antifreeze solution is added to the pine line to prevent water from being frozen. After that,  the cold water travels to a  solar collector panel. Here the solar collector panel warms the cold water thanks to its heat collected from absorbing sunlight. When water is warmed by the solar collector panel, it will go directly to the heat transfer unit which is also equipped with a heating coin that helps warm the water again. At this point, the warm water is conveyed to a storage tank for later usage. 

In conclusion, The solar water heating system uses sunlight to warm water. 

Essay: learning foreign languages

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Essay:

In some school systems, Children start learning at least one foreign language in primary school. In other school systems, foreign language begins in secondary school. In your opinion, should children learn foreign languages in schools, and if so, at what age they begin? 

Outline

Agree

The development of brain for children in the early ages, especially 4-9 is very fast -> learning foreign languages more effectively
 EX: a lot of children can use multiple languages 
As we grow older, it is hard for us to acquire a foreign language because our brain becomes less sharp.
Disagree 

Children should focus on their mother tongue. 
When they are grown up and master their mother tongue, they can learn other languages. 

Nowadays, Learning  foreign languages plays a vital role in the success of a person with the increasing globalization besides academic subjects. The ages  at which people should learn foreign languages attract people’s attention. Some people argue that primary school is a better place for children to learn  a second language instead of having to wait for secondary school. I am in favor of the idea. 

On the one hand, Learning foreign languages in primary schools brings children better results. First and foremost, The development of brain for children in early ages, especially 4-9 age group, is very fast. This helps Learning foreign languages among children become more effective. We can see a lot of children use multiple languages in daily life. Secondly, As we grow older, it is hard for us to acquire foreign language skills because our brain becomes less sharp. That is to say, many adults have to struggle with foreign languages while it is easy for children, especially at young ages to comprehend another language. 

On the other hand, many people argue that it is better for children to learn foreign languages when they are secondary school students. Therefore, Children in primary schools should study more important academic subjects like math, science, mother tongue.. instead of foreign languages which can be learned later when children reach secondary schools.  

In conclusion, Children are required to study foreign languages as soon as they are able to, especially when they enter primary schools so that they can achieve utmost  results  in mastering other languages rather than having to wait for  a few more years. 

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