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Essay:

The only way to be successful in business is to be good at maths. Do go agree or disagree?

Topic: 

successful in business/ maths 

Proposition: The only way to be successful in business is to be good at maths

Outline 

AgreeDisagree 
– understanding the numbers well -> making proper business decisions –
– maths helps people think more logically -> increasing the chance of success in business. 



– many people are successful in business without being good at maths but administration  -> hire people good at maths – Communicational skills, and teamwork skill… are required (more important than calculation skills) to be successful in business 

Introduction: It is believed that the only way to achieve success in the domain of business is to excel in maths. Although I do think that mathematics skills play a crucial role in the success of one’s business, they are not the only key component. Therefore, I personally do not agree with the stated belief. This essay will explain my point of view.

Topic 1: On the one hand, some people argue that a successful businessman must be good at maths

Topic 2:  Maths is not only the key to become successful in business because there are other more significant skills.

Summary: To sum up, being good at maths is crucial. However, this is not adequate to win in business. In addition to math science, you also need other skills mentioned above.

Common structures for task 2 (advantage and disadvantage)

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Introduction

Nowadays, More and more people….

Ví dụ: Nowadays, More and more people go to cities to earn jobs.

At present, there is an increasing number of….

Ví dụ: At present, there is an increasing number of people going to the cities to search for jobs.

This has some advantages (benefits) and disadvantages (drawbacks)

In this essay below, this problem will be considered in details

In the following essay, this issue will be taken into consideration

Body

Câu topic: This ( sự việc đang diễn ra) has some advantages/benefits/positives.

Câu support:

Firstly, (Câu support 1)

Ví dụ: Firstly, People have opportunities to widen their knowledge at a large scale by visiting overseas countries.

Câu đưa ra ví dụ( làm rõ cho câu 1): For example, They could discover the history and culture of foreign countries.

Câu support 2 (Ý bổ sung 2): In addition, they can enjoy many attractive activities that don’t exist in their home countries. For example, People from hot countries like taking part in winter sports.

Kết bài

all in all/ in summary/in conclusion/ in a word/ in summary/ to summarize

This ( chủ đề đang nói) has some advantages and disadvantages

(Despite) besides advantages, this ( chủ đề đang nói) also has some disadvantages

TASK 2 HOW TO WRITE OUTLINE (ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE)

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Thầy Anh hướng dẫn viết outline cho bài writing task 2.

Trong quá trình thầy dạy, có nhiều bạn không biết bắt đầu từ đâu khi gặp bài writing essay task 2 . Nguyên nhân của điều này là do các bạn chưa biết lập dàn ý hay viết outline nhé. 

Hướng dẫn Outline cho dạng bài advantage 

Introduction (Mở Bài) 

Talking about topic (You need to paraphrase) ( đề cập đến chủ đề, em cần paraphrase) 

Paraphrase the given problem/issue has advantages and disadvantages (Diễn đạt lại là vấn đề trong bài có thuận lợi và không thuận lợi) 

Say what are you going to do (you can skip this part) ( Nói rằng bạn đang muốn làm gì) (phần này có thể bỏ qua) 

Example 

Nowadays, Many people tend to study abroad. What are advantages and disadvantages for this?

At presents, there are increasing number of people choosing to study abroad. However, this has some benefits and drawbacks. In the essay below, the issue will be considered in details. 

Body (Thân bài) 

Body 1: 

Topic sentence: Show the main content of the first body ( chỉ ra nội dung chính đoạn 1) 

studying abroad brings many positives. 

Support sentences ( Các câu giải thích, đưa ví dụ) . 

Using some keywords like ( sử dụng một số keyword) 

  • Broaden knowledge about culture, people ( mở rộng kiến thức văn hoá, con người) 
  • Studying in high quality education system ( học trong một môt trường có chất lượng giáo dục cao) 
  • Improve foreign languages ( cải thiện ngoại ngữ) 

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Show the main content of the second body ( Chỉ ra nội dung chính của đoạn 2 ) 

However, Students often encounter some the negative aspects when they study overseas. 

Using keywords such as:

  • language barrier (rào cản ngôn ngữ)
  • Culture shock ( the differences of culture that shock/surprise people. ( Sốc văn hóa) 
  • finance (tài chính) 
  • Missing home (nhớ nhà) 

In conclusion 

  • Rewriting the main point of the essay ( viết lại ý chính)
  • Suggesting trend, or new idea 

In summary, Although studying abroad has some negative consequences, I still believe that this will be a positive trend in the future. 

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Task 2: financial support for elderly people

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Government shouldn’t have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 

 

Nowadays, the world population is aging, and this puts pressure on society. Therefore, it is said that each person should have a financial plan after their retirement and the Government doesn’t have to aid retired people. I disagree with this idea and in this essay, I will present my view.

Firstly, When people retire, they don’t have a salary anymore. Furthermore, Elderly people’s health is not as good as young people. They may easily be able to have aging-related-diseases such as heart stroke, cancer…Provided that they were sick, they would have to pay a lot of money for high hospital expenses. However, most elderly can not afford this finance if the Government does not pay for them.

Secondly, the Government should play an important role in supporting the elderly. When retired people were still young, they were working and paying taxes for the Government. Moreover, They devoted themself for the development as well as the wealth of society. Therefore, It is true that  they certainly get deserving allowances which belong to them.

Last but not least, Each person needs to have a backup plan for their future.  If The Government is unlikely to help them, for example, because of budget deficiency, The elderly will still  have to care for themself instead of expecting the Government’s help.

In summary, the Government should have to aid its retirees for their great contributions. Despite the fact that each person also should  prepare financially, so they assure a decent life after they stop working. (251 words) 

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Task 2: Aging population

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Đề bài

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problem will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

Bài chữa từ học sinh của thầy 

Một số câu hay dùng trong bài task 2

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