Đề bài: The diagram shows a method for warming water by using indirect solar water heating system
Bài làm (155 words)
The diagram highlights a process for heating water by using a Solar system
Overall, the Solar water heating system consists of 3 main parts: Solar collector panel, heat transfer unit and storage tank.
First, the Heat transfer unit is provided with cold water. Here, it is pumped into the solar collector panel through a pine line. An antifreeze solution is added to the pine line to prevent water from being frozen. After that, the cold water travels to a solar collector panel. Here the solar collector panel warms the cold water thanks to its heat collected from absorbing sunlight. When water is warmed by the solar collector panel, it will go directly to the heat transfer unit which is also equipped with a heating coin that helps warm the water again. At this point, the warm water is conveyed to a storage tank for later usage.
In conclusion, The solar water heating system uses sunlight to warm water.
In some school systems, Children start learning at least one foreign language in primary school. In other school systems, foreign language begins in secondary school. In your opinion, should children learn foreign languages in schools, and if so, at what age they begin?
Outline
Agree
The development of brain for children in the early ages, especially 4-9 is very fast -> learning foreign languages more effectively EX: a lot of children can use multiple languages As we grow older, it is hard for us to acquire a foreign language because our brain becomes less sharp.
Disagree
Children should focus on their mother tongue. When they are grown up and master their mother tongue, they can learn other languages.
Nowadays, Learning foreign languages plays a vital role in the success of a person with the increasing globalization besides academic subjects. The ages at which people should learn foreign languages attract people’s attention. Some people argue that primary school is a better place for children to learn a second language instead of having to wait for secondary school. I am in favor of the idea.
On the one hand, Learning foreign languages in primary schools brings children better results. First and foremost, The development of brain for children in early ages, especially 4-9 age group, is very fast. This helps Learning foreign languages among children become more effective. We can see a lot of children use multiple languages in daily life. Secondly, As we grow older, it is hard for us to acquire foreign language skills because our brain becomes less sharp. That is to say, many adults have to struggle with foreign languages while it is easy for children, especially at young ages to comprehend another language.
On the other hand, many people argue that it is better for children to learn foreign languages when they are secondary school students. Therefore, Children in primary schools should study more important academic subjects like math, science, mother tongue.. instead of foreign languages which can be learned later when children reach secondary schools.
In conclusion, Children are required to study foreign languages as soon as they are able to, especially when they enter primary schools so that they can achieve utmost results in mastering other languages rather than having to wait for a few more years.
In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
Bố cục:
Mở bài: Nêu topic + Chỉ ra thuận lợi và không thuận lợi của sự việc, giải pháp….
Thân Bài:
Đoạn 1 (thuận lợi)
Câu topic (việc… có 1 số thuận lợi)
Câu main idea 1 + Các câu support
Câu main idea 2+ Các câu support
…..
Đoạn 2 (Không thuận lợi)
——Y như Đoạn
Kết bài:
Nêu thuận lợi và không thuận lợi
New idea (nếu có) hoặc giải pháp.
Outline
Advantage
Disadvantage
The government have more money from tax to invest … Less people use private cars -> reducing traffic jam, the number of car accidents
Car industry face/encounter difficulties -> Car companies may go bankrupt -> leading to the high rate of unemployment This can cause a financial burden on drivers
Viet bai
Mo bai:
Nowadays, traffic issues are increasingly serious. To tackle (solve, address) these, the government should impose a large amount of levy (money from taxation) on private vehicle owners. I think this practice (solution/measure) has both the positives and the negatives.
Doan 1
Topic:
On the one hand, taxing private car owners highly has some benefits.
Firstly, the government will increase more tax money (levy) on private vehicles. Therefore, They can spend this kind of money on enhancing (improving/upgrading/intensifying/boosting) public transportation such as trains, buses, infrastructures…
Secondly, When public means of transportation gradually become more developed and modernized, more people prefer to commute (travel) by this kind of transportation, leading to (resulting in) the decrease (slump) in the number of people (commuters/travelers)using private cars. As a result, This will partly contribute to solving (handling/tackling/addressing)traffic problems such as traffic jams (traffic congestions), car accidents… which are mainly caused (inflicted)by private cars.
Doan 2
Topic:
On the other hand, Economy and the owners also suffer from (endure) financial issues if they are taxed (levied) heavily (massively=extremely, greatly)
First and foremost, taxing Cars highly discourages (deter/prevent/stop) people from buying cars. This can cause a negative impact (influence/effect/consequence) on the car industry in particular as well as (and) the economy in general.
Hence, a great deal of (many) car manufacturers may go bankrupt if less people travel by private vehicles, possibly leading to (resulting in/causing)the high rate of unemployment.
What’s more (in addition), drivers who use private cars have to spend an extra sum of money on the additional tax. This can cause (inflict) a financial burden on them, especially on people of the middle-class.
In conclusion, imposing (forcing/urging/enforcing) heavy tax on private car owners brings advantages and disadvantages. The government needs to take this into consideration.
The Two pie charts compare how Science students chose majors in 2015 and 2016.
Overall, It can be seen that the major subjects which were chosen by most students in 2015, 2016 were Physics, Chemistry respectively.
Regarding 2015, the percentage of students choosing Physics was the highest, which accounted for 35%. Next, chemistry has a bit lower percentage(30%) compared to Physics. Botany accounted for 25% which was 5% lower than chemistry. Interestingly, the proportion of students studying biology was the lowest, accounting for 10%.
In terms of 2016, Chemistry saw a dramatic increase in 2016, and it also accounted for the largest percentage 40%. Next, there was a rapid decrease in physics, from 35% in 2015 to 25% in 2016. And then, The percentage of students studying biology saw a significant rise to 15%. Botany was the less popular chosen subject which decreased strongly from 25% in 2015 to 10% in 2016.
The line chart compares the number of bushels of corn and wheat sold from 2012 to 2016.
In general, It can be seen that the amount of wheat gradually increases while that of corn sees a slight decrease in the last 2 years, and the sales of wheat are always higher than those of corn.
In 2012, about 1,250,000 bushels of wheat were sold. In the next 5 years, the figures for wheat continuously increased before reaching a peak at 2.400.000 in 2016.
Regarding Corn, it began at 1.000.000 in 2012. Then, it went up significantly to 1.500.000 which was a peak. At this point, the number of bushels of corn saw a slight decrease, standing at 1.450.000 and 1.400.00 in 2015 and 2016, respectively.
In conclusion, the differences between Corn and wheat are gradually larger in the given period.
The table compares the temperature of 5 big cities in the world (regarding the high and the low).
In general, Rome has the highest temperature while Bogota and Sydney have the lowest temperature for the low and the high respectively
Rome has the temperature of 89 for the high and 67 for the low, both of which are the highest among 5 cities.
Next, Tokyo ranks second with 82 for the high and 66 for the low, compared to London which has temperature of 73 for the high and 60 for the low.
After that, Bogota has the temperature of 62 which is in the fourth place for the high and the temperature for the low is 42, being the lowest temperature. Finally, Sydney is in the last place for the high (60), and slightly higher than Bogota for the low (45)
In conclusion, the positions of all cities for the high are the same as for the low except Bogota and Sidney
Many people argue that in order to improve education quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Hướng dẫn Brain storming (Thầy Anh IELTS)
View 1
View 2
-Students are welcome to give their opinion over teacher’s expertise -> Teacher adjusts their teaching method ( improve knowledge) to meet the students’ demand -> enhance educational quality
– Break/lose the tradition of respecting teachers -> leading misconduct (misbehavior) – Some students can take advantage of this to humiliate teachers – Some teachers can punish their students for negative comments -> Creating unequal environment in classes/schools.
Để tính điểm ielts, ta cộng điểm các thành phần rồi chia cho 4.
Ví dụ. Ta có điểm sau. Reading: 6.0. Listening: 7.0. Writing: 6.5. Speaking: 6.5. Vậy điểm trung bình overall là: (6.0+7.0+6.5+6.5):4=6.5. Bạn này đang ở band 6.5
Quy tắc làm tròn:
Điểm ielts chỉ có thể là số nguyên hoặc làm tròn số thập phân tận cùng là 5
Làm tròn theo quy tắc phần thập phân lớn hơn hoặc bằng 0,25 thì làm tròn lên, thấp hơn 0,25 thì làm tròn xuống
Ví dụ:
Điểm trung bình là 4.25 làm tròn thành 4.5
Điểm trung bình 5.125 làm tròn thành 5.0 (0,125 <0,25)
Điểm trung bình 6.25 làm tròn thành 6.5 nhưng 6.75 làm tròn thành 7.0
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Spelling (chính tả).
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Lỗi danh từ đếm đc /không đếm được
It can be seen from the chart that amountnumber of Japanese people travelling abroad increased significantly each year apart from 1990. ( số người là đếm được nên dùng number)
Lỗi mạo từ
The given chart shows an illustration of the pregnancy percentages in 6 Middle Eastern nations over a 10 –year period from 1990 to 2000. (thiếu a)
Lỗi so sánh
In 1990, an Oman woman gave birth to nearly 7 babies. Meanwhile the fertility percentages in Bahrain and Kuwait was relatively similar, with respective figure as 2 times lower lesser as than Oman.
-> 2 times lower than Oman
I think mostly women than men in educating kids.
-> I think most Women are better at nurturing their children than men
Thiếu Đại từ quan hệ
People who want to move to the city usually find it hard to adapt to city life. (thiếu Who)
-> People wanting to move to the city usually find it hard to adapt to city life. (cách 2 dùng mệnh đề V_ing)
Lỗi giới từ
The line graph shows that 2% of Japanese tourists reached Australia in 1986 (Lỗi thiếu of)
7. Lỗi dùng đại từ (gây khó hiểu)
Dùng đại từ hợp lý là rất tốt, nhưng cần cân nhắc sử dụng để không làm cho người đọc bị rối.
However, parents sometimes love their children so much that they attempt to provide a nice and easy existence for them. ( them dễ làm người đọc khó hiểu là ai, mặc dù đọc kỹ cũng sẽ them là thay cho trẻ con)
