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Task 1 process how paper is recycled
(164 words)
The chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the stage that is ready for making paper.
Initially, in the first stage of the process, used papers with the help of a conveyor belt are placed in a container with a mixture of water and chemicals to convert them into pulp which then goes to debris screen to remove dirt.
Once the pulp has been filtered, it is cleaned in a container containing a mixture of water and soap. Next, the cleaned pulp is transferred to flotation cell which helps get rid of ink left on papers. After that, a piece of equipment called refiner helps beat the pulp so that it becomes smooth before the bleach stage with the purpose of making the pulp white with the assisstance of chemical process. Finally, it is ready for the next stage to become new fresh paper.
bài mẫu task 1 table thi 16/4
Từ đồng nghĩa
Output: yield (n,v)
Cost: expense
Scale -> level
Pay -> income/salary/wage
Number ->figure/quantity
Từ nối so sánh
While
Whereas
Compared to /in comparison with
Followed by
Bài mẫu (182 words)
Thay Anh ielts
The table shows how much industrial ships and small boats spend and gain in marine shipping industry. Overall, Although, the number of small boats is more than 20 times that of industrial ships, output of big-level industry is higher than that of small-level industry. While the number of small boats is 12.000.000, that of industrial ships is only 500.000. Output of annual catch of each sector is slightly different for consumption food with 29 million tones produced in the industry scale, compared to 24 million tones yielded in the smaller scale. The Amount of Food gained for Industry us is 22 million tones in big scale and zero in small scale. Salaries of employees in big scale, being from $25000 to $250000 which are one hundred times higher than those in small scale. In contrast, The figure for people who work in small boats is 50 times higher, at 40 million compared to 8 million of big scale. Finally, Although, big Scale uses much fewer ships than small scales, it consumes 4 times as much energy as small scales.
MỘT SỐ VÍ DỤ PARAPHRASE TASK 1
THẦY ANH HƯỚNG DẪN MỘT SỐ VÍ DỤ VIẾT LẠI CÂU HAY DÙNG TRONG TASK 1
- Online sales were up by 12 per cent.
rewrite: The earnings from the internet increased by 12 per cent
- The rate of inflation increased by 2 per cent.
Rewrite: the percentage of inflation rose slightly by 2 per cent
- More people go to university in city A than city B
rewrite: Going to university in city A is more popular than city B
The number of tertiary undergraduates in city A is higher than that of city B
- Female students have more amount of time for study than Male students
rewrite: Female students often spend more time studying than males
- Sales of computer increased to more than 10000
rewrite: the number of computers sold out exceeded over 10000
- The bar chart shows the sales of car for a company from 2000 to 2010
rewrite :The bar chart illustrates the number of cars sold out in a firm in the first decade of 2000s
- The bar chart illustrates many cars were sold out in a firm between 2000 and 2010
Two pie charts show how the workforce was distributed in Britain in the year 1932 and 1992.
Two pie charts provides the division of workforce in Britain from 1932 to 1992.
- Overall, the dominance of industry was replaced by the services. Besides, more people got jobs in 1992 than 1932.
rewrite: In general, More and more people worked in the services while industry witnessed a dramatic increase. Moreover, There was a considerable decrease in unemployment rate.
sample process: coffee production
Thầy Anh Hướng dẫn viết bài process . Các bạn chú ý những điều dưới đây nhé
- Câu chia ở hiện tại đơn
- Thường sử dụng dạng bị động
- Cần thêm lời của mình (nếu biết) cho đủ từ: giải thích bước này dùng để làm gì
- Tra thêm thuật ngữ để biết giải thích
The diagram illustrates the process of coffee production
Overall, there are nine steps to go from harvesting coffee beans to delivery to consumers
The first step is that coffee beans are harvested in the field. After that, they are put into a depulper which crushes coffee beans, so they become softer. Next, Coffee beans are soaked into a fermenting tank, and this step lasts from 1 to 3 days before fermented coffee beans are dried in the sunlight at the next step. At this point, Coffee beans are put into sorters which helps remove the low-quality coffee beans to keep high-quality ones. And then Coffee beans are cook and turn brown since they go to a roaster. Next, they are ground in a Grinder to become powder. And then, Ground coffee is packed and delivered to the grocery stores by trucks. Finally, Consumers can enjoy cups of tasty coffee at coffee shops or at homes.
(157 words by Thay Anh)
sample process of heating a house
The diagram shows the process of heating a house by a wood pellet boiler system
Overall, The wood pellet boiler system consists of four main components: pellet storage, boiler, hot water tank, and Radiator
Firstly, wood pellets were delivered to the house that is equipped with wood pellet boiler system. Wood pellets are kept in pellet storage house. Next, wood pellets go to a boiler that burns wood to generate hot water. From here, Hot water moves up to the hot water tank that is connected to the shower. If water in Hot water tank is cold, it moves down and goes to the boiler to be heated again. After that, from the boiler, hot water also moves up to radiator that turns hot water into cool water before moving down and going to the boiler. This process repeats itself. Finally, Hot water tank, radiator, and boiler together are connected, which provides heat for underfloor
(155 words by Thay Anh)
Sai lầm hay mắc khi viết biểu đồ tròn
Thầy Anh tổng hợp những sai lầm học viên của thầy hay mắc khi mới học viết biểu đồ tròn
Đề bài thường có 2 biểu đồ tròn như hình trên
Một số sai lầm khi viết biểu đồ tròn
Sử dụng peak
Ví dụ: Urban reached a peak at 50% in 2015. Chú ý: peak hay dùng trong biểu đồ đường hơn nhé
Viết lại: Urban accounted for 30% in 1915 while it increased sharply to 50% for last century
So sánh 2 mục khác nhau ở 2 biểu đồ khác nhau
Ví dụ. in 1915 Rural made up 60% which was higher than urban 50%
Giải thích: Chỉ so sánh mục cùng loại để thấy sự tăng giảm
Viết lại: in 1915 Rural made up 60%, and then it decreased dramatically to 10% in 2015
Sử dụng chênh lệch phần trăm không hợp lý
in 1915, Rural was 30% higher than Urban.
Giải thích: Vì Rural gấp đôi Urban nên viết như trên chưa hợp lý
Viết lại: The percentage of people living in rural was twice than that of of urban.
Cấu trúc as…as trong bài task 1
As…as ngoài việc sử dụng trong so sánh bằng mà nhiều bạn đã biết, nay thầy hướng dẫn những cách sử dụng mới của cấu trúc as…as nhé
As much (danh từ không đếm được) as
In 2020, Company A produced as much amount of rice as Company B
Trường hợp nói gấp 2,3 ta chỉ cần thêm twice hoặc three times trước as nhé.
Ví dụ. The amount of gas sold in 2020 was twice as much as in 2019
As many (danh từ đếm được) as
in 2020, the population of China was approximately ten times as many as Russia
In Rio 2016 Olympics, The united states won 37 silver medals, more than twice as many as Rusian Federation
Cấu trúc more than và more..than trong bài task 1
Thầy Anh hướng dẫn các bạn cách viết so sánh sử dụng more than và more…. than
Cấu trúc more than
- More than + number. Ví dụ: sales of computer accounted for more than 30% (ít hơn dùng less than nhé)
Cấu trúc more…than
- Giữa More …than là mệnh đề. Ví dụ: More students enrolled in school A than school B
- Giữa more…than là danh từ/ cụm danh từ. Ví dụ: Female students have more amount of time for study than Male students
- Giữa more…than là tính từ hoặc trạng từ có 2 âm tiết trở lên, 1 âm tiết ta thêm -er vào sau nhé. Ví dụ horror film is more popular than sciencitific film hoặc popuplation of city A grows faster than that of city B
Hướng dẫn paraphrase mở bài task 1- thầy anh ielts
1. Biểu đồ: barchart (cột), pie chart (tròn), table (bảng), chart, graph(biểu đồ), diagram(hình vẽ dùng cho bài process)
2. Một số động từ mang nghĩa chỉ ra, minh họa : illustrate, show, highlight, describe
3. Thông tin dữ liệu: information, data
4. Các từ về tỉ lệ %: percentage (thường đi với of), percent ( trước đó là con số), rate, proportion
4. Thường bài task 1 liên quan đến con số. Nên ta cần biết cách sử dụng
the number of +danh từ đếm được (chuyển thành how many)
the amount of + danh từ không đếm được ( chuyển thành how much)
5. Sử dụng mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn
The line chart compares the percentage of time which was spent by students for different activities at a university
Viết lại The line chart illustrates the rate of time spent by students for different activities at a university
Ví dụ
The line graphs show the average annual income of males and females at different ages in Australia in 2001.Two graphs illustrate how much men and women earned annually at different ages in Australia in 2001.
The bar chart shows the sales of car for a company from 2000 to 2010
The chart highlights how many cars were sold in a company between 2000 and 2010
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