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Essay: Testing on animals

Outline:

  1. Introduction
    • Overview of the ethical debate on using animals in medical experiments.
  2. Advantages of Animal Testing
    • Testing new drugs, vaccines, and procedures on animals.
    • Predicting side-effects and ensuring safety and efficacy.
    • Controlled and secure testing environment.
  3. Disadvantages of Animal Testing
    • Inhumane and unethical treatment of animals.
    • Inefficacy due to physiological differences between humans and animals.
    • Contribution to a culture that normalizes the use of animals for human benefit.
  4. Conclusion
    • The need for a balanced approach that considers both ethical treatment of animals and medical advancement.

Phrases

  1. Ethical debate – Cuộc tranh luận về đạo đức
  2. Medical experiments – Thí nghiệm y học
  3. Testing new drugs – Kiểm tra các loại thuốc mới
  4. Predicting side-effects – Dự đoán tác dụng phụ
  5. Safety and efficacy – An toàn và hiệu quả
  6. Controlled environment – Môi trường được kiểm soát
  7. Inhumane and unethical – Vô nhân đạo và không đạo đức
  8. Physiological differences – Sự khác biệt sinh lý
  9. Culture that normalizes – Văn hóa bình thường hóa
  10. Ethical treatment – Điều trị đạo đức
  11. Medical advancement – Tiến bộ y học
  12. Balanced approach – Phương pháp cân bằng

One of the most debated ethical issues in the field of medicine nowadays is the use of animals in medical experiments. This essay will explore both sides of this debate, examining the advantages and disadvantages of using animals for medical experiments.

The first advantage of this method is that it allows the testing of new drugs, vaccines and procedures on animals before they are performed on humans. This step will determine the safety and efficacy of new medical products  and predict possible side-effects in humans, which is essential for preventing human health from adverse effects of faulty products. Another benefit of using animals for medical experiments is the opportunity to test new treatments in a more controlled and secured environment. The use of animal models in experiments allows researchers to control various variables such as age, gender, weight, et cetera in a way that is much more difficult with human subjects. This could increase the accuracy of the results, speeding up the development of new medical treatments. 

However, this approach has some significant downsides. The most obvious complaint against experiments on animals is that it is inhumane and unethical to subject animals to painful and even lethal testing. Furthermore, opponents of this method argue that human physiology can not always be replaced by animal representation, which can eventually lead to ineffective treatments wasting time and resources. Finally, the use of animals for experiments can contribute to a widespread culture which normalizes and legitimizes the use of living beings as mere resources for human benefit. This can result in negative attitudes and practices against animals, which can have severe consequences for both human and animal life. 

In summary, the use of animals for medical testing is a complex issue. The ethical treatment of animals and the pursuit of medical knowledge must be balanced in a way that prioritizes both human and animal lives. 

advantages and disadvantages of wearing school uniforms

School uniforms are a common feature of many educational institutions around the world. They are often seen as a way to promote discipline, equality, and identity among students. However, they also have some drawbacks that should be considered before implementing them. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of wearing school uniforms, and provide some suggestions for improving them.

One of the main advantages of school uniforms is that they can reduce bullying and peer pressure. By wearing the same clothes, students do not have to worry about being judged or teased for their appearance, style, or economic status. This can foster a sense of belonging and respect among classmates, and prevent discrimination based on clothing preferences. Moreover, school uniforms can simplify the morning routine and save time and money for parents and students. Instead of spending hours choosing what to wear, students can just put on their uniforms and be ready for school. Parents do not have to buy expensive or trendy clothes for their children, which can reduce their financial burden.

However, school uniforms also have some disadvantages that should not be ignored. One of the main disadvantages is that they can limit students’ freedom of expression and creativity. By wearing the same clothes every day, students may feel bored or stifled, and lose their sense of individuality and personality. They may also resent the authority that imposes the uniform policy on them, and rebel against it in other ways. Furthermore, school uniforms may not suit everyone’s needs or preferences. Some students may have different body types, skin tones, or religious beliefs that make them uncomfortable or unhappy with the uniform. They may also prefer to wear clothes that reflect their culture, hobbies, or interests.

In conclusion, school uniforms have both advantages and disadvantages that should be weighed carefully before adopting them. While they can promote a positive school environment and reduce some practical problems, they can also suppress students’ individuality and diversity. A possible solution is to allow some flexibility and variation in the uniform policy, such as allowing students to choose from different colors, styles, or accessories. This way, students can still express themselves and feel comfortable, while maintaining a sense of unity and order in the school.

Outline task 2 (maths), thi Hải Dương 21/5

Essay:

The only way to be successful in business is to be good at maths. Do go agree or disagree?

Topic: 

successful in business/ maths 

Proposition: The only way to be successful in business is to be good at maths

Outline 

AgreeDisagree 
– understanding the numbers well -> making proper business decisions –
– maths helps people think more logically -> increasing the chance of success in business. 



– many people are successful in business without being good at maths but administration  -> hire people good at maths – Communicational skills, and teamwork skill… are required (more important than calculation skills) to be successful in business 

Introduction: It is believed that the only way to achieve success in the domain of business is to excel in maths. Although I do think that mathematics skills play a crucial role in the success of one’s business, they are not the only key component. Therefore, I personally do not agree with the stated belief. This essay will explain my point of view.

Topic 1: On the one hand, some people argue that a successful businessman must be good at maths

Topic 2:  Maths is not only the key to become successful in business because there are other more significant skills.

Summary: To sum up, being good at maths is crucial. However, this is not adequate to win in business. In addition to math science, you also need other skills mentioned above.

Common structures for task 2 (advantage and disadvantage)

Thầy Anh hướng dẫn sử dụng các mẫu câu hay dùng trong writing task 2 (advantage)

Introduction

Nowadays, More and more people….

Ví dụ: Nowadays, More and more people go to cities to earn jobs.

At present, there is an increasing number of….

Ví dụ: At present, there is an increasing number of people going to the cities to search for jobs.

This has some advantages (benefits) and disadvantages (drawbacks)

In this essay below, this problem will be considered in details

In the following essay, this issue will be taken into consideration

Body

Câu topic: This ( sự việc đang diễn ra) has some advantages/benefits/positives.

Câu support:

Firstly, (Câu support 1)

Ví dụ: Firstly, People have opportunities to widen their knowledge at a large scale by visiting overseas countries.

Câu đưa ra ví dụ( làm rõ cho câu 1): For example, They could discover the history and culture of foreign countries.

Câu support 2 (Ý bổ sung 2): In addition, they can enjoy many attractive activities that don’t exist in their home countries. For example, People from hot countries like taking part in winter sports.

Kết bài

all in all/ in summary/in conclusion/ in a word/ in summary/ to summarize

This ( chủ đề đang nói) has some advantages and disadvantages

(Despite) besides advantages, this ( chủ đề đang nói) also has some disadvantages

TASK 2 HOW TO WRITE OUTLINE (ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE)

Thầy Anh hướng dẫn viết outline cho bài writing task 2.

Trong quá trình thầy dạy, có nhiều bạn không biết bắt đầu từ đâu khi gặp bài writing essay task 2 . Nguyên nhân của điều này là do các bạn chưa biết lập dàn ý hay viết outline nhé. 

Hướng dẫn Outline cho dạng bài advantage 

Introduction (Mở Bài) 

Talking about topic (You need to paraphrase) ( đề cập đến chủ đề, em cần paraphrase) 

Paraphrase the given problem/issue has advantages and disadvantages (Diễn đạt lại là vấn đề trong bài có thuận lợi và không thuận lợi) 

Say what are you going to do (you can skip this part) ( Nói rằng bạn đang muốn làm gì) (phần này có thể bỏ qua) 

Example 

Nowadays, Many people tend to study abroad. What are advantages and disadvantages for this?

At presents, there are increasing number of people choosing to study abroad. However, this has some benefits and drawbacks. In the essay below, the issue will be considered in details. 

Body (Thân bài) 

Body 1: 

Topic sentence: Show the main content of the first body ( chỉ ra nội dung chính đoạn 1) 

studying abroad brings many positives. 

Support sentences ( Các câu giải thích, đưa ví dụ) . 

Using some keywords like ( sử dụng một số keyword) 

  • Broaden knowledge about culture, people ( mở rộng kiến thức văn hoá, con người) 
  • Studying in high quality education system ( học trong một môt trường có chất lượng giáo dục cao) 
  • Improve foreign languages ( cải thiện ngoại ngữ) 

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Show the main content of the second body ( Chỉ ra nội dung chính của đoạn 2 ) 

However, Students often encounter some the negative aspects when they study overseas. 

Using keywords such as:

  • language barrier (rào cản ngôn ngữ)
  • Culture shock ( the differences of culture that shock/surprise people. ( Sốc văn hóa) 
  • finance (tài chính) 
  • Missing home (nhớ nhà) 

In conclusion 

  • Rewriting the main point of the essay ( viết lại ý chính)
  • Suggesting trend, or new idea 

In summary, Although studying abroad has some negative consequences, I still believe that this will be a positive trend in the future. 

Xem các cấu trúc hay dùng trong dạng bài advantage

Task 2: financial support for elderly people

Government shouldn’t have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 

 

Nowadays, the world population is aging, and this puts pressure on society. Therefore, it is said that each person should have a financial plan after their retirement and the Government doesn’t have to aid retired people. I disagree with this idea and in this essay, I will present my view.

Firstly, When people retire, they don’t have a salary anymore. Furthermore, Elderly people’s health is not as good as young people. They may easily be able to have aging-related-diseases such as heart stroke, cancer…Provided that they were sick, they would have to pay a lot of money for high hospital expenses. However, most elderly can not afford this finance if the Government does not pay for them.

Secondly, the Government should play an important role in supporting the elderly. When retired people were still young, they were working and paying taxes for the Government. Moreover, They devoted themself for the development as well as the wealth of society. Therefore, It is true that  they certainly get deserving allowances which belong to them.

Last but not least, Each person needs to have a backup plan for their future.  If The Government is unlikely to help them, for example, because of budget deficiency, The elderly will still  have to care for themself instead of expecting the Government’s help.

In summary, the Government should have to aid its retirees for their great contributions. Despite the fact that each person also should  prepare financially, so they assure a decent life after they stop working. (251 words) 

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