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The chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the stage that is ready for making paper. 

Initially, in the first stage of the process, used papers with the help of a conveyor belt are placed in a container with a mixture of water and chemicals to convert them into pulp which then goes to debris screen to remove dirt. 

Once the pulp has been filtered, it is cleaned in a container containing a mixture of water and soap. Next, the cleaned pulp is transferred to flotation cell which helps get rid of ink left on papers. After that, a piece of equipment called refiner helps beat the pulp so that it becomes smooth before the bleach stage with the purpose of making the pulp white with the assisstance of chemical process. Finally, it is ready for the next stage to become new fresh paper.

Từ đồng nghĩa

Output: yield (n,v) 

Cost: expense 

Scale -> level 

Pay -> income/salary/wage 

Number ->figure/quantity 

Từ nối so sánh

While 

Whereas 

Compared to /in comparison with 

Followed by 

Bài mẫu (182 words)

Thay Anh  ielts

The table shows how much industrial ships and small boats spend and gain in marine shipping industry.  Overall, Although, the number of small boats is more than 20 times that of industrial ships, output of big-level industry is higher than that of small-level industry. While the number of small boats  is 12.000.000, that of industrial ships is only 500.000. Output of annual catch of each sector is slightly different for consumption food with 29 million tones produced in the industry scale, compared to 24 million tones yielded in the smaller scale. The Amount of Food gained  for Industry us is 22 million tones in big scale  and zero in small scale. Salaries of employees in big scale, being from $25000 to  $250000 which are one hundred times higher than those in small scale. In contrast, The figure for people who work in small boats is 50 times higher, at 40 million compared to 8 million of big scale. Finally, Although, big Scale uses much fewer ships than small scales, it consumes 4 times as much energy as small scales. 

THẦY ANH HƯỚNG DẪN MỘT SỐ VÍ DỤ VIẾT LẠI CÂU HAY DÙNG TRONG TASK 1

• Online sales were up by 12 per cent.

• The rate of inflation increased by 2 per cent.

Rewrite: the percentage of inflation rose slightly by 2 per cent 

• More people go to university in city A than city B 

• Female students have more amount of time for study than Male students

rewrite: Female students often spend more time studying than males 

• Sales of computer increased to more than 10000

rewrite: the number of computers sold  out exceeded over 10000

• The bar chart shows the sales of car for a company from 2000 to 2010

rewrite :The bar chart illustrates the number of cars sold out in a firm in the first decade of 2000s 

• The bar chart illustrates many  cars  were sold out in a firm between 2000 and 2010 

• Overall, the dominance of industry was replaced by the services. Besides, more people got jobs in 1992 than 1932.

rewrite: In general, More and more people worked in the services while industry witnessed a dramatic increase. Moreover, There was a considerable decrease in unemployment rate.