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Chi tiết dạng bài advantage

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Task 2 (advantage) 

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. 

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? 

Bố cục: 

Mở bài: Nêu topic + Chỉ ra thuận lợi và không thuận lợi của sự việc, giải pháp….

Thân Bài: 

Đoạn 1 (thuận lợi) 

  • Câu topic (việc… có 1 số thuận lợi) 
  • Câu main idea 1 + Các câu support
  • Câu main idea 2+ Các câu support 
  • …..

Đoạn 2 (Không thuận lợi) 

——Y như Đoạn

Kết bài: 

  • Nêu thuận  lợi và không thuận lợi 
  • New idea (nếu có) hoặc giải pháp. 

Outline 

Advantage Disadvantage 
The government have more money from tax to invest … Less people use private cars -> reducing traffic jam, the number of car accidentsCar industry face/encounter  difficulties -> Car companies may go bankrupt -> leading to the high rate of unemployment This can cause  a financial burden on drivers 

Viet bai 

Mo bai: 

Nowadays, traffic issues are increasingly serious. To tackle (solve, address) these, the government should impose a  large amount of levy (money from taxation)  on private vehicle owners. I think this practice (solution/measure) has both the positives and the negatives.

 Doan 1 

Topic: 

On the one hand, taxing private car owners highly has some benefits. 

Firstly, the government will increase more tax money (levy)  on private vehicles. Therefore, They can spend this kind of money on enhancing (improving/upgrading/intensifying/boosting) public transportation such as trains, buses, infrastructures…

Secondly, When public means of transportation gradually become more developed and modernized, more people prefer to commute (travel) by this kind of transportation, leading to (resulting in) the decrease (slump) in the number of people (commuters/travelers)using private cars. As a result, This will partly contribute to solving (handling/tackling/addressing)traffic problems such as traffic jams (traffic congestions), car accidents… which are mainly caused (inflicted)by private cars. 

Doan 2 

Topic: 

On the other hand, Economy and the owners also suffer from (endure) financial issues if they are taxed (levied) heavily (massively=extremely, greatly)

First and foremost, taxing Cars highly discourages (deter/prevent/stop) people from buying cars. This can cause a negative impact (influence/effect/consequence)  on the car industry in particular as well as (and) the economy in general. 

Hence,  a great deal of  (many)  car manufacturers may go bankrupt if less people travel by private vehicles, possibly leading to (resulting in/causing)the high rate of unemployment.

What’s more (in addition), drivers who use private cars have to spend an extra sum of money on the additional tax. This can cause (inflict) a financial burden on them, especially on people of the middle-class. 

In conclusion, imposing (forcing/urging/enforcing) heavy tax on private car owners brings advantages and disadvantages. The government needs to take this into consideration.

Bài mẫu line chart

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(151 words)

The line chart compares the number of bushels of corn and wheat sold from 2012 to 2016.

In general, It can be seen that the amount of wheat gradually increases while that of corn sees a slight decrease in the last 2 years, and the sales of wheat are always higher than those of corn.

In 2012, about 1,250,000 bushels of wheat were sold. In the next 5 years, the figures for wheat continuously increased before reaching a peak at 2.400.000 in 2016.

Regarding Corn, it began at 1.000.000 in 2012. Then, it went up significantly to 1.500.000 which was a peak. At this point, the number of bushels of corn saw a slight decrease, standing at 1.450.000 and 1.400.00 in 2015 and 2016, respectively. 

In conclusion, the differences between Corn and wheat are gradually larger in the given period.

Hướng dẫn viết task 1: table

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Thay Anh IELTS

The table compares the temperature of 5 big cities in the world (regarding the high and the low). 

In general, Rome has the highest temperature while Bogota and Sydney have the lowest temperature for the low and the high respectively  

Rome has the temperature of  89  for the high and 67 for the low, both of which are the highest among 5 cities. 

Next, Tokyo ranks second with 82  for the high and 66  for the low, compared to London which has temperature of  73 for the high and 60 for the low. 

After that, Bogota has the temperature of 62 which is in the fourth place for the high and the temperature for the low is 42,  being the lowest temperature. Finally, Sydney is in the last place for the high (60), and slightly  higher than Bogota for the low (45) 

In conclusion, the positions of all cities for the high are the same as for the low except Bogota and Sidney 

Hướng dẫn viết bài task 2 thi ielts hải dương ngày 20/01/2022

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Đề bài

Many people argue that in order to improve education quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion 

Hướng dẫn Brain storming (Thầy Anh IELTS)

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-Students are welcome to give their opinion over teacher’s expertise -> Teacher adjusts  their teaching method ( improve knowledge) to meet the students’ demand -> enhance educational quality
– Break/lose  the tradition of respecting teachers -> leading misconduct (misbehavior)  
– Some students can take advantage of this to humiliate teachers 
– Some teachers can punish their students for negative comments -> Creating unequal environment in classes/schools.

Lỗi viết trong bài làm của học viên Thầy Anh

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note: Tên của các bạn vì sự riêng tư nên thầy không ghi ra

Spelling (chính tả).

Nếu soạn trên word có phần mềm soát lỗi chính tả, thì sau khi từ bị sai ( có dấu đỏ) cần đoán xem bị sai ở chữ cái nào rồi dùng chức năng auto repair.

Viết giấy cần có người check hộ cho mình.

Lỗi danh từ đếm đc /không đếm được 

It can be seen from the chart that amount number  of  Japanese people travelling abroad increased significantly each year apart from 1990.   ( số người là đếm được nên dùng number)

Lỗi mạo từ 

The given chart shows an illustration of the pregnancy percentages in 6 Middle Eastern nations over a 10 –year period from 1990 to 2000.  (thiếu a)

Lỗi so sánh 

In 1990, an Oman woman gave birth to nearly 7 babies. Meanwhile the fertility percentages in Bahrain and Kuwait was relatively similar, with respective figure as 2 times  lower lesser as  than Oman.  

-> 2 times lower than Oman

I think mostly women than men in educating kids.

-> I  think most Women are better at nurturing their children than men 

Thiếu Đại từ quan hệ 

People who want to move to the city usually find it  hard to adapt to city life. (thiếu Who)

-> People wanting  to move to the city usually find it  hard to adapt to city life. (cách 2 dùng mệnh đề V_ing)

Lỗi giới từ 

The line graph shows that 2%  of  Japanese tourists reached Australia in 1986 (Lỗi thiếu of)

7. Lỗi dùng đại từ (gây khó hiểu)

Dùng đại từ hợp lý là rất tốt, nhưng cần cân nhắc sử dụng để không làm cho người đọc bị rối.

However, parents sometimes love their children so much that they attempt to provide a nice and easy existence for them. ( them dễ làm người đọc khó hiểu là ai, mặc dù đọc kỹ cũng sẽ them là thay cho trẻ con)

Hướng dẫn chi tiết dạng bài process (Thầy Anh)

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Dang bai process ( Thay Anh)  

Bo cuc cua bai quy trinh process 

Mo bai: neu quy trinh dung lam gi? ( Can viet lai (paraphrase) de bai) 

Overview: Quy trinh gom bao nhieu buoc ( buoc dau va ket thuc) 

Than bai: Theo thứ tự Nội dung của từng bước 

Ket bai ( co hoac ko) 

Chu ý: 

– Dung hien tai don, chia bi dong 

Cau bi dong 

S+ to be ( is/are/am) + p2 

After, before 

Buoc 1 . Buoc 2 

Cach 1: BUoc1. Then, BUoc 2 

Cách 2: BUoc 1 Before Buoc 2 

Sau  before: 

  • Menh de 
  • Cum danh tu 
  • V_ing 

Các từ có nghĩa “Tiếp theo”:

Next, 

Then, and then 

after that, 

At this point

Subsequently 

After which

Mo bai: 

The diagram shows the process of….

-> The diagram shows/ illustrates/involves  the steps for ….

Viet lai de bai o vi du tren 

The diagram involves the steps for recycling plastic bottles. 

Cau overview 

Cach 1: Overall, there are … steps from… to….

Cach 2: It takes ….. steps from…to…. 

Ap dung vi du 

Overall, there are 7 steps from consumers using plastic bottles to    plastic recycled products 

Overall, there are 7 steps from plastic bottles used by consumers  to   plastic recycled products

Overall, there are 7 steps from used plastic bottles   to   plastic recycled products

Viet than bai 

Tu nghia la dau tien 

First, initially, in the beginning 

Tiep theo: da trinh bay o tren 

Cuoi cung: finally, in the end 

The first step is that Plastic bottles are used by consumers 

Initially,  Plastic bottles are used by consumers. Then, Plastic bottles are collected and put in recycling bins. Next, recycling bins are transported to recycling plant. 

Then, Plastic bottles are collected and put in recycling bins before being transported to recycling plant.

Dạng bài advantage|what are the advantages and disadvantages of living with the old people in the family?

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Thầy Anh Gợi ý cách làm

Chú ý các bài dạng advantage đều có cấu trúc viết gần như tương tự với cấu trúc bên dưới.

Mở bài: 

Nêu topic (ngày này tại  một số nước tồn tại kiểu gia đình có nhiều thế hệ  (extended family) 

Việc sống chung với người cao tuổi có nhiều thuận lợi và không thuận lợi

Thân bài 

Đoạn 1 ( Nói về Thuận lợi) 

Câu topic: there are some benefits when living with the old people.

  • They take care of babies 
  • They do house chores
  • Bring valuable experiences for other members 

Đoạn 2 ( Nói về Không Thuận lợi) 

Câu topic: However, Living with the elderly brings  family some drawbacks

  • family conflicts  ( mâu thuẫn gia đinh) can happen because of generation gap ( khoảng trống/ cách giữa các thế hệ ) .  For example, the differences in raising babies 
  • The elderly usually do not make money, so They can be a financial burden (gánh nặng tài chính) 
  • The old people tend to get sick while their children are busy with work. 

Kết bài  (Tổng hợp ý chính)

Việc sống cùng người già có nhiều thuận lợi và không thuận lợi. 

Mỗi gia đình tùy theo hoàn cảnh mà nên quyết định có sống cùng người già không.

(Each family depends  on certain circumstances when….) 

Topic: disease related covid ( ielts thầy anh)

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suffocating: ngạt thở

tested positive: xét nghiệm dương tính

Treated at the hospital (điều trị, dùng bị động)

Get vaccinated: tiêm phòng (have a shot)

Chú ý cách dùng to be less likely to do smt (khả năng thấp xảy ra việc gì đó)

Ex: fully vaccinated travelers are less likely to get and spread Covid-19

Ex: India’s union territory of Delhi has imposed (áp đặt) a night curfew (giới nghiêm) with immediate effect as coronavirus cases there mount (tăng).

Covid-19 vaccines are very helpful in preventing you from getting sick

Chú ý cách dùng faster: số lần + so sánh hơn

A CNN analysis shows the US is vaccinating its people nearly five times faster than the global average

Describe a useful website that you have visited

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Describe a useful website that you have visited. You should say:

  • what it was
  • how you found the address
  • what it contains
  • and explain why it was useful to you.

Note:

  • Through my friend
  • Downloadable materials
  • Information, updated, user~friendly, links

The website that I’m really interested in is (..); one of the most visited educational websites. I visit it almost every day as it is the homepage of my computer. I found it through one of my friends. Once, I saw an offline message, containing a link. When I clicked on the link and saw the website, I really found it beneficial. To describe this English educational website, I should say, it contains lots of downloadable materials; classified vocabulary, grammar structures, quizzes, and that sort of thing. There are many features that make this website different from other websites. Firstly, it provides a learner with lots of useful information, and…er. .. is updated with new content at regular intervals; you can always find quality information in it. Besides, it is very user-friendly and easy to navigate. Another aspect is that it has many useful links to other sites. Last but not least, it is visually attractive and well-designed. In my opinion, it’s such a functional website that no English learner should miss

Describe a member of your family who is very close to

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Describe a member of your family who is very close to
You should say:

  • who he/she is
  • in what ways you are like him/her
  • how you differ from him/ her
  • and explain why you are so close to him/ her.

NOTES

My sister [...], films , major Looks; height. hair, skin Personality

To be honest, it’s difficult for me to choose just one member of my family as I do feel close to all of them. But If I had to name . . . e r . . . I w o u l d say my elder sister. Her name is [ . . . ] . Although she is 5 years older than me, we get along so well; we are very similar in personality. We spend most of our time together…er. .. share the same interests and have lots of fun. For example, we follow the latest movies, especially, action movies. Sometimes, we talk about films for hours ….er… Another common point is our university majors; she has completed her education in business and I’m studying business too. So we have lots of things to talk about, you know, having the same major has given us the same outlook on life…er. by contrast, we’re totally different in looks; so unlike that, no one would ever think we are sisters! For instance, I have dark skin whereas she has fair skin. Or her hair is kind of curly, but my hair is straight. The reason why we are so close to each other is that we simply have the same personality traits. We understand each other because we grew up doing things together.